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7 thoughts on “Dare to Soar Telesummit Free Workshops

  1. I hereby declare this page ready for publication, too. Doret and Regina, I have invented talks for both of you to give.

  2. Howdy Patty –
    As per your request, here are my thoughts on the Workshops test page:

    CHECKING TEXT

    (1) ADD a hyphen to Life changing below:
    Celebrating 8 Life Changing New Books and Courses

    (2) REPLACE the below with the main #s for 2019:
    Phone Number: 1-641-715-3670 – Access Code: 968558#

    (3) Is the TBA info ready?:
    As Healthy as You Want to Be!
    Description TBA
    Speaker: Regina Gysel
    Speaker bio TBA

    (4) In Quit stress listing, ADD the between help & nervous in the below:
    We will discover what stress really is, and how you can help nervous system relax.

    (5) To make the below flow with the rest of its section, I ‘d suggest adding to the start something like Barbara Says: [[[include the colon]]] OR you could change it to During this session, Barbara’s WriteSpeak coaches…questions about the year-long…
    During this session, my WriteSpeak coaches Patty and Matt will answer all your questions about my year-long WriteSpeak program, which begins again on March 1st. Registration opens today.

    (6) Is Doret’s TBS info ready?
    Description TBA
    Speaker: Doret Jordaan
    Doret JordaanBio TBA

    (7) In the Healthy Boundaries section:

    (a) ADD a space between yourself, & or
    If you have struggled to stand up for yourself,or ask

    (b) Is TBA info ready/
    Speaker: Eugenie Basu, MA, MBA, Health and Wellness Expert
    Bio TBA

    (8) In the Not enough Time section:

    (a) the comma after Discover is really wrong, (just saying so it is said):
    Discover, what’s underneath your lack of time and get control of your life.

    (b) Can you delete the comma from above and put it where it IS really needed? After the intro clause of more than 4 words! Yikes, after Speaker:

    As a sought-after Transformational Coach and Professional Speaker Johanna offers inspiring workshops

    (c) Is the below correct? What is a Text course? Does it just mean no audio?:
    Self-paced online Text course

    (d) REPLACE the period with a comma after NC & should US be USA?:
    Live workshop coming up in Charlotte, NC. US

    (9) In the Career Recharge section:

    (a) DELETE TBA below (because her bio is filled in):
    Speaker: Beth Benatti Kennedy, TBA

    (b) FIX SPACING OR LINEBREAK for the below:
    Check out Beth Kennedy’s new book, Career Recharge: Five strategies to boost resilience and beat burnout.

    (10) In the section for the Gardener’s Gift, DELETE TBA (because her bio is filled in):
    Speaker: Laura Kingston, TBA

    (11) Is TBA info available for You Can’t Give Out of an Empty Glass?:
    Description TBA
    Speaker: Sylvia Green
    Bio TBA

    (12) In the section for How Do YOU Define,

    (a) the ellipsis should be REPLACED w/a long dash (an ellipsis is really for when words are left out on purpose):

    know some of you are so smart that you would get there…eventually.

    (b) Suggest changing
    help us get there more quickly and with less stress, road blocks and construction.
    TO
    help us get there more quickly, with less stress and construction and fewer road blocks.

    (c) ADD a comma after provoking & a hyphen in mini workshop & DELETE to between success & that in the below:

    for this fun and thought-provoking mini workshop about authentic success to that can help you get to where YOU want to go!

    (d) Oh, here is this again. The last comma should really a long dash instead:

    In 2007, she launched Creating Success Stories with a goal of giving women who face poverty, or a myriad of challenging situations, the tools and support that foster a better life experience, one choice at a time.

    (e) DELETE the period after the question mark below:
    Hear Tammy Garver’s mini-workshop, How Do YOU Define Authentic Success?.

    (13) In the section for How to Be a Life-Changing Author and Speaker by Next February, ADD p.m. or pm, whatever your style has been, for the time below:

    This is a repeat of the 2:05 session, but with new questions and new answers.

    (14) To create flow, I think you need to ADD Barbara says: to the below OR REPLACE my w/Barbara’s AND my w/the:

    During this session, my WriteSpeak coaches Patty and Matt will answer all your questions about my year-long WriteSpeak program, which begins again on March 1st. Registration opens today.

    (15) In the section for Finding and Creating an Environment Where You Can Thrive,

    (a) Check the line breaks. Looks like were paragraphs, but now not really & some odd white space is there.

    (b) DELETE extra space in between aware & the hyphen below:
    and bring about their own best gifts. Michele has trained and mentored award -winning teachers and

    (c) Whatever I said the last time I saw this somewhere would be good here too:

    Michele loves to redesign homes for herself and others, create gardens and travel, all activities which are full of potential waiting to be brought to life.

    (16) In the Laugh section:

    (a) DELETE the space before & after yoga inside the quotation marks below:
    The “ yoga ” in Laughter Yoga

    (b) Where is her contact info?

    (17) At the end of the section for Coping with Creative anxiety section, solve the widow by starting new line with Ten in the phrase below:

    Check out Kris Dyson’s new online course, 3 Days to Unstuck — Get Action on Your Creative Passions and her new book, Ten Tiny Things.

    CHECKING LINKS

    (1) Wrong session topic & time shows in Timeand Date.com for the link below:

    10:05 am Eastern Saturday, February 9, 2019

    (2) WriteSpeak page dates.

    (3) In the section for Healthy Boundaries in Relationships: Beyond Just Knowing When to Say ‘No’:

    (a) At the link below, REPLACE Health with Healthy in TimeandDate.com for:
    12:30 pm Eastern Saturday, February 9, 2019

    (b) Ut-oh, Welcome to movinginwardtomoveforward.com This Web page is parked for FREE, courtesy of GoDaddy.com.

    (4) In Not Enough Time section

    (a) Facebook?

    (b) Twitter link does not go to twitter, goes to workshops test page

    (5) On TimeandDate.com, ADD an apostrophe in Gardeners:

    3:05 pm Eastern Saturday, February 9, 2019
    Gardeners Gift Workshop

    (6) Error message for
    Website: http://www.AndreaKlee.com
    This site can’t provide a secure connection http://www.andreaklee.com sent an invalid response.
    Try running Windows Network Diagnostics.
    ERR_SSL_PROTOCOL_ERROR

    (7) WriteSpeak dates

    (8) REPLACE *** in title at TimeandDate.com for
    5:30 pm Eastern Saturday, February 9, 2019

    *** Workshop
    How abbreviate? Finding and Creating an Environment Where You Can Thrive
    Perhaps: An Environment to Thrive

    (9) REPLACE *** in title at TimeandDate.com for
    6:05 pm Eastern Saturday, February 9, 2019
    *** Workshop
    Make: Laugh Til It Helps

    (10) REPLACE *** in title at TimeandDate.com for
    6:30 pm Eastern Saturday, February 9, 2019
    *** Workshop
    Make: Coping With Creative Anxiety

    (11) The link below goes to top of book page, needs to go to her spot instead:

    Check out Kris Dyson’s new online course, 3 Days to Unstuck — Get Action on Your Creative Passions

    Bye for now,
    Beth

  3. Hello Patty,
    (Sorry for the late reply, got the mail in the night, and today was a no-internet day off)

    Nice job!
    Could you add “(slow-nomad)” after “slow-mad”… I realized that people don’t get it, and then they imagine strange things!

    For the links: can you take facebook & instagram out, and keep only those two:
    Website: http://www.integrallyalive.com
    Facebook Group: http://www.facebook.com/groups/integrallyalivecommunity

    Thank you so much for your dedication!

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